Thursday, August 4, 2016

the time I tried my first lemon

The time I tried my first lemon
Plan
R.A.F.T
                                                                          
R.my self
A.new zealand\home
F. sense’s
T.lemon

Key words of the story

  • Face
  • Lemon
  • Dad and Mum
  • Screaming
  • Face swirling and crunshebar   up

One day when I was at my house dad went out to get a lemon for The fish that we were having for dinner. “He said do you want try a lemon mate”. I said “ok let me try a lemon please”, and this  was when I was like only Five. When I was trying the lemon, he put the juice into the cup then he let me try the other bit of the lemon that didn't have the juice from the lemon init. when I tried the lemon it was not that sweet or sour but I did try to run for a drink BUT I accidently got the cup of lemon that dad poured the juice in, I was screaming loud even the neighborhood could hear it It was really stupid and I am trying to regret the day I did that. I was panting and breathing hard and fast, My tongue was hanging out of my mouth like a dog hanging out of the window. My dad was laughing so so HARD! he almost weed his pants,After I ate and drank the lemon I was going to my mum to tell on my dad for doing that but It was actually my fault. she wasn't here so I waited for her to get back to our house. After the accident with my dad and the lemon, I tried to forget that day when I am older.


What the story was about.
This is a memory report of the first time tried a lemon. writing

1 comment:

  1. After you said "the neighborhood could hear it" there was no full stop when there was meant to be one. Its just something to think about. My star is... I like how you told a story about when you were five.

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